tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post8764211250568470086..comments2023-03-28T05:23:30.194-05:00Comments on coalesquecoalesquecoalesce: Kim. A Poem.buttonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13198592300400120695noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post-70195496782072479322010-01-12T18:53:34.577-06:002010-01-12T18:53:34.577-06:00Fair enough. The allusions and devices I've em...Fair enough. The allusions and devices I've employed here do not readily spell out the m-e-a-n-i-n-g as clearly as I'd assumed. Oh well. At least you found another one.<br /><br /><br /><br />However, most of the claims you have been making about my mental disposition have been your own. This should probably register as insulting, but fortunately my heart's armor is composed of contrary evidence and enduring patience.Mah Velouriahttp://coalesque.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post-48612923570632702232010-01-12T16:38:53.511-06:002010-01-12T16:38:53.511-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.K Mohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05014615597697643008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post-39559973291606012642010-01-12T12:03:27.875-06:002010-01-12T12:03:27.875-06:00By admitting several comments up that neither beau...By admitting several comments up that neither beauty or intelligence prevent nor promote happiness, I thought to have made my position clear. Evidently this claim has been overlooked, even though it is the position you take as well.<br /><br />You are very dedicated to erecting a comparison and this is something I wanted to avoid. I implore you to reconsider the second stanza of this poem ironically. The ellipses at the end, followed by the obvious break in meter, was plotted in this manner in order to situate the entire stanza as a sort of joke. A hyperbole of your accusations, if you will. I am dramatizing your perception of me.<br /><br />I am unsure how you feel about this poem. I envisioned it first as an apology (stanza 1), then as a re-imagining of the situation between us that bothered you so much. If you were expecting something else, I apologize. <br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Narrative is vital to my existence. To defend (or explain) my worldview at this point would probably only offend you, and perhaps reinvigorate your urges to offer even more suggestions about how to improve my social and mental life. You seem to still be quite hurt by some of the things I said, and if it requires a whole new series of accusations to temper some of that hurt, please do not hesitate to reveal even more ways in which I am an inadequate person. To be clear, I do not say this sarcastically.Mizz Aureliushttp://coalesque.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post-47283511600132518922010-01-12T09:28:06.112-06:002010-01-12T09:28:06.112-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.K Mohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05014615597697643008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post-63302199404774158662010-01-11T23:55:44.932-06:002010-01-11T23:55:44.932-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.K Mohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05014615597697643008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post-87452366134890267782010-01-11T23:13:09.467-06:002010-01-11T23:13:09.467-06:00We hope you're being factitious...the point wa...We hope you're being factitious...the point wasn't to compare aesthetic or intellectual qualities. You know that neither prevent nor promote happiness. <br /><br />We envy your ability to connect to the world.Empress XXIIv2http://coalesque.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post-50653907896409749342010-01-11T22:45:02.585-06:002010-01-11T22:45:02.585-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.K Mohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05014615597697643008noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post-84510809302205643422010-01-11T18:06:55.947-06:002010-01-11T18:06:55.947-06:00touchétouchéWellshttp://johnmanning.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7763339324851688762.post-5401596159222147102010-01-11T11:08:26.182-06:002010-01-11T11:08:26.182-06:00It wouldn't be me if I included pomp in my res...It wouldn't be me if I included pomp in my response:<br /><br />You're an amazing writer. No one will ever write something that anyway relates to me as well as you just did. <br /><br />"Be careful what you pretend to be. You are what you pretend to be" -Kurt VonnegutK Mohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05014615597697643008noreply@blogger.com