accents accident accurate addiction airports allusion alphabetizing anti-depressants art autechre Avis BEATS Benjamin binaries biological birds blood bodies boundaries bowflex bowie brainfeeder Brazil breaking addiction bricolage bye Canadians cats celebrity look-alike christianity. metaphysics cigarettes classical music clement greenberg cliche coincidence coldplay collage collective color creeps curating cycles dada daft punk daughters death depression Derrida descartes detroit dictionary discuss feelings disguise drama dreams eating el mundo elephants envelopes erotic ethics everything. explanation fashion fathers fear filters flesh flowers flying lotus food Francis Bacon freak friends fuck games Gertrude Stein ghosts girl cops girl talk goat God graduate school grammar guilt haiku Hegel history homage horror humor hymn hypocrisy ice icons indie rock indie rock is dead internet irony it jay-z jealousy John Manning kitsch kraftwerk language lcd soundsystem letters like lists literally writing love mac man ray Manchester meaning memory men metal milk monks moral schizophrenia names nashville nietzsche noise non-poems nonsense numbers objects of montreal painting Panamanians panties paradox patience personality disorder philosophy piano pills platonic forms poetry lessons prefix professional psychological trauma symptomatic of a broken space-time continuum punk puppy puzzles quotation recognition regret reincarnation remix repetition review riffz RJD2 Russians sacrifice sad sampling sex sisters sketch skull smoking solitude sounds space spelling splitting steel guitar stoicism stoned suicide syllables tag technology THE 80s the creative process the distressed The Field theology thesis time trembling twin ugly update voice voyeurism wolves women worms year of the rabbit

Friday, July 24, 2009

“How-To Poetry Lesson One: Building The Bricks”

I am dieting on elemental words.
Rudimentary prose.

Solid: “the axis”
Liquid: “penetrated”
Air: “bluish-toned rows”

Solid: the/a, a concept or thing with clear empirical verifiability OR inclination towards willful suspension of disbelief via geometric, analytic, and/or commonsensical application; e.g. “a ball, some star, arched lemon, the million little deaths, the millions I’ll never want to again.”

Liquid: basically what you’d think “verbose” meant if you didn’t already know it misleadingly means “wordy.” Verb-y. Pair with slant-rhymed adverbs to generate movement. Morally troublesome words can be limited in embellishment. Animation of non-verbs benefits from the hinting hyphen. e.g. “teeming, frothed, shimmer brimming, viscous slather, rape, violate, cross-bowed, center-folded.”

Air: deconstructive sector of the elemental triad; harnesses language and imagination with matched vigor. The meaning itself is contained entirely within the text. In e.g. “bluish-toned rows,” “rows” offers the physical presence thus far lacking in the stanza and also rhymes with “prose;” “bluish-toned” smoothes the always-abrupt end of the stanza by stitching a hyphen between a universal suffix on the left and a universal prefix on the right; one sees how light, how figure-eighted and muscled and slight -

Exercise. Fill these in. Use your pen.
Solid: ________
Liquid: _______
Air: __________

Next Lesson: “Structuring The Bricks”
Homework: think of Words That Sound Like "Brick" -or- think of Words That Sort Of Sound Like "Brick" But Also Operate Within Similar Systematic Environments.

3 footnotes:

Anonymous said...

Exercise. Fill these in. Use your pen.
Solid: ________
Liquid: _______
Air: __________

Fill these in. Use your pen.
Cool meter. Fill these in (1,2,3). Use your pen. (1,2,3). List-like, same syllables in triples. Mirrored in the triad: solid, liquid, air. Structure paired (and shown) with poetry best in this part, I think.

Looking forward Structuring The Bricks, Kel.

Thank you again for the book and your painting, and a birthday to eclipse the rest.

I admire and respect you. Nashville will treat you well.

I promise letters and a visit.

Love, Amy

tender buttons said...

The best kinds of friends are the ones who share art supplies and play 1997 Modest Mouse.

take some pics of those murals you're painting for campus. I wanna see.

Anonymous said...

like amy i found the exercise quite poetic.

she missed one though. Its a triumverant, a sequence of three syllable commands.

Exercise (3sybs) fill these in (3sybs) use your pen (3sybs): all three of are in Dactyl meter. you walk a fine line between accident and intuation.